war - cinquain
mission the mock warriors scan heaven for signs of approvalthe machines crush onward
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Interesting...an inverted cinquain...not something I've tried, although I've played with mirrored poems in other forms...but this is effective... Exit light...Enter night...Take my hand...We're off to...
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Notorious K1M, war is new to me. Your verses make me ponder two meanings. The first being a "holy war" and the other is of soldiers with modern technics. Either way, your few words depict so...
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I liked this, it is well done, and a pleasure to read. It also reads very well from the bottom up, was that intentional?Thank you so much for sharing this...Angel
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soul -- appreciate the kind works. i'm really learning a lot from fluid dynamics. love that forum.thespianna -- i'm happy to hear that my poem made you think. thank you.angel -- you know what, it...
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One to make you think... they press onward regardless, yet keep checking for approval. Step into Suzie's Sanctuary
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Wow. I'm not familiar with this inverted form. This is excellant.Reads well bottom to top too.Best,Sandy
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